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You live close to restaurant and have been disturbed by the noise

You live close to restaurant and have been disturbed by the noise 6p82K

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to express my strong dissatisfaction about such terrible noice making me nervous in the evenings. First of all, when I return from my work I always suffer from a variety of loud music coming from your restaurant. As a result, this situation leads to discourage my working efficiency the whole day. Afterwards, the visitors of your restaurant speak to each other so loudly that it resulted in disturbing my peace constantly. As the location of the restaurant is close to mine I can clearly hear what they say. I wish to live without any inconvenience. I consider, I have right to live as I want. For these reasons, I suggest that voice of music should be turned down and take into account other citizens' disturbance. I hope you will consider the points I have raised carefully and resolve it to our satisfaction. Unless I hear you within 10 days, I shall have to take legal action on this matter. Yours faithfully, Fayziyeva Ozoda

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to express my strong dissatisfaction about such terrible Possible spelling mistake found.nicevoicenoisenoticeNicenovice
noice
 making me nervous in the evenings. This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, when I return from my work I always suffer from a variety of loud music coming from your restaurant. As a result
, this situation leads to discourage my working efficiency the whole day. Afterwards, the visitors of your restaurant speak to each other This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
loudly
 that it resulted in disturbing my peace constantly
. “As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
 the location of the restaurant is close to mine I can clearly
 hear what they say. I wish to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 without any inconvenience. I consider, I have right to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 as I want. For these reasons, I suggest that voice of music should be turned
 down and take into account other citizens' disturbance. I hope you will consider the points I have raised carefully
 and resolve it to our satisfaction. Unless I hear you within 10 days, I shall This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 take legal action on this matter. Yours faithfully
, Possible spelling mistake found.
Fayziyeva
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