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An investment in knowledge pays the best interest" quoted by Benjamin Franklin still holds to today's world, the more you invest in learning the more you grow richer. For me, books have played a pivotal role in gaining knowledge & building an attraction towards the business and economics. My name is Harsh Bhupat Movaliya. I am resident of India. I intend to apply for Human Resource Management-HRMN Graduate Certificate program in Georgian college (Toronto campus). To give my background, I passed class X with 8. 2 CGPA in 2017 and class XII (commerce stream) with 79% in 2019 from Jay International School. I am pursuing my Bachelor of Business Administration degree in International Business from GLS University. During my study, I am studying subjects like international HRM, supply chain management, marketing which gave me profound knowledge of business management. I have done IELTS with an overall band score of 7. My summer internship at Impero Poly Films and Maruti Enterprise (Anthem) given me the experience of working in an organization oriented towards management. My primary responsibilities included administrative tasks, such as data entry, payroll, assisting employees and monitoring social media platforms for trading news, ideas and feedback. Canada is a highly developed country and offers one of the highest qualities of education across the globe. The high quality of education is always my main reason to study abroad. The Canadian education system is a multicultural country that provides internationally recognized degrees. After doing extensive research and advice of my teachers I have developed desire to pursue my graduate study in Georgian college. The reason why I apply in Georgian college is that it provides students much more than just an academic learning. I am particularly attracted by the student focused programs and facilities at Georgian that helps students to achieve their goals. Without a proper human resources management department in an organization, that company is almost guaranteed to fail. Therefore, It is crucial asset for any organization, although today many tasks have been handing over to the artificial intelligence but they lack judgement skills which cannot be matched. The course curriculum includes various important subjects like Human Resources Planning, Occupational Health and Safety, Training and Development, Recruitment and Selection and many more. Through these subjects, I would learn how to effectively develop and manage good coordination between the employees. It will definitely help me in the future. After completion of my course at Georgian College, I have decided to leave Canada and come to my home country India. I will serve for my country’s betterment with skill set regarding human resource because this course will definitely open number of doors for me in India after coming back from Canada. I am lucky because I belong to Gujarat, which is a hub of many industries, where I can utilize my skills and talents in renowned companies as well as big Multi-National Companies such as Reliance Industries Ltd, TATA Groups, Mahindra & Mahindra Groups, and Adani Groups etc. Initially, I would prefer joining local companies to gain some experience and later on, I can leap towards big multinational companies. I am eager to gain exposure to a diverse class and looking forward to management experience and skill sets with peer group. It would be a great pleasure and honor for me if given a chance to pursue a PGDM course at your prominent college. With my professional experience, academic performance, and versatility, I am positive that I will not only match your expectations but also heighten the standards set by your college. I hope you will find me a deserving and credible student & would provide an opportunity to prove myself by studying at Georgian college. I thank you for this opportunity to express myself. I sincerely hope that my application is favorably received.
An investment in knowledge pays the best interest
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today
's world, the more you invest in learning the more you grow richer. For me, books have played a pivotal role in gaining knowledge & building an attraction towards the
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business
and economics. My name is Harsh
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Bhupat
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Movaliya
. I am resident of India. I intend to apply for
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Human
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Management-HRMN
Graduate Certificate program in Georgian college (Toronto campus).

To give my background, I passed
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class
X with 8. 2 CGPA in 2017 and
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class
XII (commerce stream) with 79% in 2019 from Jay International School. I am pursuing my Bachelor of
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Business
Administration degree in International
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Business
from GLS University. During my study, I am studying subjects like international HRM, supply chain
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management
, marketing which gave me profound knowledge of
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business
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management
. I have done IELTS with an
overall
band score of 7.

My summer internship at
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Impero
Poly
Films and
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Maruti
Enterprise (Anthem)
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given
me the
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experience
of working in an organization oriented towards
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management
. My primary responsibilities included administrative tasks, such as data entry, payroll, assisting employees and monitoring social media platforms for trading news,
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ideas
and feedback.

Canada is a
highly
developed
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country
and offers one of the highest qualities of education across the globe. The high quality of education is always my main reason to study abroad. The Canadian education system is a multicultural
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country
that provides
internationally
recognized degrees. After doing extensive research and advice of my teachers I have developed desire to pursue my graduate study in Georgian college. The reason why I apply in Georgian college is that it provides
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students
much more than
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just
an academic learning. I am
particularly
attracted by the
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student
focused programs and facilities at Georgian that
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helps
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students
to achieve their goals.

Without a proper
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human
resources
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management
department in an organization, that
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company
is almost guaranteed to fail.
Therefore
, It
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is crucial
asset for any organization, although
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today
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many
tasks have been handing over to the artificial intelligence
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but
they lack judgement
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skills
which cannot
be matched
. The
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course
curriculum includes various
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important
subjects like
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Human
Resources Planning, Occupational Health and Safety, Training and Development, Recruitment and Selection and
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many
more. Through these subjects, I would learn how to
effectively
develop and manage
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good
coordination between the employees. It will definitely
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help
me in the future.

After completion of my
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course
at Georgian College, I have decided to
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leave
Canada and
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come
to my home
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country
India. I will serve for my
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country’s
betterment with
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skill
set regarding
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human
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resource
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because
this
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course
will definitely open number of doors for me in India after coming back from Canada. I am lucky
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because
I belong to Gujarat, which is a hub of
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many
industries, where I can utilize my
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skills
and talents in renowned
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companies
as well
as
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big
Multi-National
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Companies
such as Reliance Industries Ltd, TATA
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Groups
, Mahindra & Mahindra
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Groups
, and
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Adani
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Groups
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Initially
, I would prefer joining local
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companies
to gain
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some
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experience
and later on, I can leap towards
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big
multinational
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companies
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I am eager to gain exposure to a diverse
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class
and looking forward to
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management
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experience
and
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skill
sets with peer
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group
. It would be a great pleasure and honor for me if
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PGDM
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match your expectations
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& would provide an opportunity to prove myself by studying at Georgian college.

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I
sincerely
hope that my application is
favorably
received.
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IELTS letter Canada Georgian human resources management course

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632 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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