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ou have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter explain why you changed jobs describe your new job tell him/her your other news

Dear Tom I’m just writing to let you know I quit my old job and found something new. I was really fed up with being a brain surgeon because it wasn’t really much of a challenge anymore. You know me; if I’m not learning new tricks, I get bored too easily and have to find something new. I’m now teaching English as a foreign language in Vietnam and it suits me down to the ground. I teach two adult classes and a kindergarten class, which is not only challenging but also rewarding too. Can you believe it? I also have some other amazing news- I’m getting married. She was one of my first ever students and I guess it was love at first sight for both of us. Make sure you keep the first weekend in July free, so you can come and celebrate with us. Keep in touch Chris

Dear Tom

I’m This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 writing to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 you know I quit my This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 job and found something new.

I was really
 fed up with being a brain surgeon This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it wasn’t really
 much of a challenge anymore. You know me; if I’m not learning new tricks, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 bored too easily
 and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 find something new.

I’m This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 teaching English as a foreign language in Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).Vietnam, and
Vietnam and
 it suits me down to the ground. I teach two adult classes and a kindergarten This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
, which is not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 challenging This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 rewarding too. Can you believe it?

I also
 have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 other amazing news- I’m getting married. She was one of my first
 ever students and I guess it was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 at first
 sight for both of us. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
Make
 sure you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 the first
 weekend in July free, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 you can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 and celebrate with us.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
Keep
 in touch

Chris

IELTS letter ou have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter explain why you changed jobs describe your new job tell him/her your other news

Letter

American English

7 paragraphs

149 words

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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 6.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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