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ou have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter explain why you changed jobs describe your new job tell him/her your other news

Dear Tom I’m just writing to let you know I quit my old job and found something new. I was really fed up with being a brain surgeon because it wasn’t really much of a challenge anymore. You know me; if I’m not learning new tricks, I get bored too easily and have to find something new. I’m now teaching English as a foreign language in Vietnam and it suits me down to the ground. I teach two adult classes and a kindergarten class, which is not only challenging but also rewarding too. Can you believe it? I also have some other amazing news- I’m getting married. She was one of my first ever students and I guess it was love at first sight for both of us. Make sure you keep the first weekend in July free, so you can come and celebrate with us. Keep in touch Chris
Dear Tom

I’m
just
writing to
let
you know I quit my
old
job and found something new.

I was
really
fed up with being a brain surgeon
because
it wasn’t
really
much of a challenge anymore. You know me; if I’m not learning new tricks, I
get
bored too
easily
and
have to
find something new.

I’m
now
teaching English as a foreign language in
Vietnam and
it suits me down to the ground. I teach two adult classes and a kindergarten
class
, which is not
only
challenging
but
also
rewarding too. Can you believe it?

I
also
have
some
other amazing news- I’m getting married. She was one of my
first
ever students and I guess it was
love
at
first
sight for both of us.
Make
sure you
keep
the
first
weekend in July free,
so
you can
come
and celebrate with us.

Keep
in touch

Chris
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IELTS letter ou have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter explain why you changed jobs describe your new job tell him/her your other news

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
149 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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