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You are going on a short course to a training college abroad. It is a college that you have not been to before. Write a letter to the accommodation officer. In your letter, give details of your course and your arrival/departure date explain your accommodation needs ask for information about getting to and from the college

You are going on a short course to a training college abroad. It is a college that you have not been to before. Write a letter to the accommodation officer. In your letter, give details of your course and your arrival/departure date explain your accommodation needs ask for information about getting to and from the college dYrE

Dear Mr. Mathew, I am John Smith international student from India. I am writing this letter to ask information regards of my stay during my course at your college. I am enrolled in the course name Quality control at University of Manitoba for 2 months. As it is short term course college does not provide me the hostel to stay. I need to search my own accommodation. I will be there on July 14 via flight at almost 2 p. m. As I am alone one bedroom, hall, and kitchen is enough for me to stay during my studies. I need this near to city center as I am new here therefore I do not know much more about it. I have heard that the city center location is appropriate as all the things of daily needs are easily available. Apart from this, it is near to my college thus not only saves the time during transportation but also saves my money too. It would be grate if you could provide me some details about the local transportation such as city bus or cabs to travel from home to university. Please let me know what is the price of the house and in which location the places are available. Look for hearing from you. Yours Sincerely, John Smith.

Dear Mr. Mathew,

I am John Smith international student from India. I am writing this letter to ask information regards of my stay during my course at your college.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am enrolled
 in the course name Quality control at University of Manitoba for 2 months. “As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
 it is short term course college does not provide me the hostel to stay. I need to search my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 accommodation. I will be there on July 14 via flight at almost 2 p. m. As I am alone one bedroom, hall, and kitchen is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 for me to stay during my studies. I need this near to city center as I am new here therefore
 I do not know much more about it. I have heard that the city center location is appropriate as all the things of daily needs are easily
 available. Apart from this, it is near to my college thus
 not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 saves the time during transportation This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 saves my money too.

It would be Consider using a past participle here: "grated".grated
grate
 if you could provide me This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 about the local transportation such as city bus or cabs to travel from home to university. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me know what is the price of the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 and in which location the places are available.

Look for hearing from you.

Yours Sincerely
,

John Smith. 