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You stayed at your friend's house when you participated in a business seminar in New York. You left a file with important documents in the room where you stayed. Write a letter to your friend and include reason for writing, describe the file and ask him/her to return it to you by post.

You stayed at your friend's house when you participated in a business seminar in New York. You left a file with important documents in the room where you stayed. Write a letter to your friend and include reason for writing, describe the file and ask him/her to return it to you by post. BKNa
My dearest Gurpreet, Hello! I am doing well at my place and hope the same for you. I am very sorry to write this letter after so many days. The reason behind this is that I was very busy. Firstly, I would like to thank you and your family for the attention and care you gave me, while I was in Sudbury. Services like that are priceless and precious. I am also writing this letter to inform you that I forget a very crucial document at your house. The document is a business document signed by the director for which I was there in New york. As per I remind the papers were with me after the seminar. In the evening before headed to the party I kept them on the study table near the almirah. After returning home I have been searching for the file desperately in the midst of my luggage however could not find it. Unfortunately, I think I have left them in the room where I stayed. I request you to rummage around the room and inform me immediately. Because without that significant file my career would be at stake, transport it via express entry as soon as possible. I will pay all the expenses by directly depositing them in your bank. Just give me your bank name, bank account number and branch address. I shall be very thankful to you. Pay my regards to your parents. with best wishes, Ramneet
My dearest
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Gurpreet
,

Hello! I am doing well at my place and hope the same for you. I am
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very
sorry to write this letter after
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so
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many
days. The reason behind this is that I was
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very
busy.
Firstly
, I would like to thank you and your family for the attention and care you gave me, while I was in
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Sudbury
. Services like that are priceless and precious. I am
also
writing this letter to inform you that I forget a
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very
crucial document at your
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house
.

The document is a business document signed by the director for which I was there in
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New york
. As
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per I
remind the papers were with me after the seminar. In the evening
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before
headed to the party I
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kept
them on the study table near the
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almirah
. After returning home I have been searching for the file
desperately
in the midst of my luggage
however
could not find it. Unfortunately, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
I have
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left
them in the room where I stayed.

I request you to rummage around the room and inform me immediately.
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Because
without that significant file my career would be at stake, transport it via express entry as
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soon
as possible. I will pay all the expenses by
directly
depositing them in your bank.
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Just
give me your bank name, bank account number and branch address. I shall be
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very
thankful to you.

Pay my regards to your parents.

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with
best wishes,

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Ramneet
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IELTS letter You stayed at your friend's house when you participated in a business seminar in New York. You left a file with important documents in the room where you stayed. Write a letter to your friend and include reason for writing, describe the file and ask him/her to return it to you by post.

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6.0
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