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You started a new language course a few weeks ago. Write an email to your friend explaining what you find easy and what you find difficult about learning English. Write bw 150 and 200 words.

Hi Emma, Recently I've started a new language course. I've been thinking about this for a couple of weeks because I don't have much time, but I want to learn English to take the C1 exam. In the first few days of the course I was desperate because I wasn't on the same level as the others. I could hardly understand what they were talking about. I didn't give up because I really wanted to do this. I took notes, asked my questions and after a week or two I caught up with the other students. In writing my grammar is almost perfect but when I speak I make a lot of mistakes, so I have to work on that. I was wondering, we could speak on the phone to improve my skills. On the other hand I found out that I can learn new words very easily! It's so much fun! I hope we can talk soon. Love you, Noémi
Hi Emma,

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I want to learn English to take the C1 exam.

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I wasn't on the same level as the others. I could hardly understand what they were talking about. I didn't give up
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because
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really
wanted to do this.
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took notes, asked my questions and after a week or two I caught up with the other students. In writing my grammar is almost perfect
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but
when I speak I
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mistakes,
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work on that. I was wondering, we could speak on the phone to
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skills
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I found out that I can learn new words
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very
easily
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much fun!

I hope we can talk
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IELTS letter You started a new language course a few weeks ago. Write an email to your friend explaining what you find easy and what you find difficult about learning English. Write bw 150 and 200 words.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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