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4. You started a new language course a few weeks ago. Write an email to your friend explaining what you find easy and what you find difficult about learning English. Write bw 150 and 200 words.

Hi Mark, As you already know, I started a language course about a month ago. I have been trying to learn English for ages now because it was a bit awkward that every single person I know had already had a language exam and I couldn't even say a word. I think I am proceeding pretty well, our teacher is truly wonderful. On the whole, I find the English language pretty easy in comparison to other languages I learned. However, there are some moments in class when I must concentrate really strongly to understand what we are talking about. For example, I simply hate conditionals, they don't make any sense at all! This is the issue with verbal tenses too. There are 12 of them but in a normal situation, you only use about 3. After all, I find the English very easy to study but there are some hard aspects in every language one tries to learn. I think if I keep working hard, I will reach my goal and finally learn this beautiful language. I hope to hear from you soon. Love, Ábris
Hi Mark, As you already know, I
started
a
language
course about a month ago. I have been trying to learn English for ages
now
because
it was a bit awkward that every single person I know had already had a
language
exam and I couldn't even say a word. I
think
I am proceeding pretty well, our teacher is
truly
wonderful.
On the whole
, I find the English
language
pretty easy
in comparison
to other
languages
I learned.
However
, there are
some
moments in
class
when I
must
concentrate
really
strongly
to understand what we are talking about.
For example
, I
simply
hate conditionals, they don't
make
any sense at all! This is the issue with verbal tenses too. There are 12 of them
but
in a normal situation, you
only
use
about 3.
After all
, I find the English
very
easy to study
but
there are
some
hard
aspects in every
language
one tries to learn. I
think
if I
keep
working
hard
, I will reach my goal and
finally
learn this
beautiful
language
. I hope to hear from you
soon
.
Love
,
Ábris
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IELTS letter 4. You started a new language course a few weeks ago. Write an email to your friend explaining what you find easy and what you find difficult about learning English. Write bw 150 and 200 words.

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6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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