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You started a new language course a few weeks ago. Write an email to your friend explaining what you find easy and what you find difficult about learning English. Write bw 150 and 200 words.

Hi DomaI am just started a course two weeks ago to learn English. First we started to learn some colors and animals. That was pretty easy, but then we moved to the present simple grammar tense. It was quiet difficult and It was only just one from the twelve other tenses. But it is logical so it is not that terrifying. I think English is one of the easiest languages in the word, but of course it is not that simple to learn a hole new language. I am pretty sure about that, if you catch the flow with the English words and grammar you can get better in it very fast. And in the future it is will be very usefull to speak the world language any where in your life. Overall I think it is worth it the all suffering to learn to speak in English perfectly. I hope, I see you soon, Balu
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IELTS letter You started a new language course a few weeks ago. Write an email to your friend explaining what you find easy and what you find difficult about learning English. Write bw 150 and 200 words.

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  American English
2 paragraphs
155 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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