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You received an email from your friend, Jane. She asked you for some information about one of your friends. Read part of her email below.

You received an email from your friend, Jane. She asked you for some information about one of your friends. Read part of her email below. 8aP85

Dear Jane, It is such a long time we haven't talked with each other. I talked to An about you some times and that is the reason why she emailed you. An is my friend at high school. She is an adorable, hilarious and amiable girl. She willed to give a hand when other classmates had difficulties. She is not only one of the most excellent pupils in my class but also a talented person, especially playing traditional musical instruments. Of course, it is one of her hobbies. In her spare time, she usually reads books, plants trees. Now she is a student of Academy of Journalism and Communication. It is said that she also has good results certificate. As I told you above, I think you completely take some comfort in letting An stay with your family until she can find a new accommodation. Feel free to ask me if you wonder more. Looking forwards to receiving your reply. Your friend.

Dear Jane, It is such a long time we haven't talked with each other. I talked to An about you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 times and that is
 the reason why she emailed you. An is my friend at high school. She is an adorable, hilarious and amiable girl. She willed to give a hand when other classmates had difficulties. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
She
 is not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 one of the most excellent pupils in my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
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but
also
 a talented person, especially
 playing traditional musical instruments. Of course
, it is one of her hobbies. In her spare time, she usually
 reads books, plants trees. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
Now
 she is a student of Academy of Journalism and Communication. It is said
 that she also
 has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 results certificate. As I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informed
told
 you above, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 you completely take This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 comfort in letting An stay with your family until she can find Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply "new accommodation".new accommodation
a new accommodation
. Feel free to ask me if you wonder more. Looking forwards to receiving your reply. Your friend. 