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You saw an advertisement in a newspaper asking for volunteers for a charity event. write a letter to the organizer that do you have interest in this , do you have any previous experiences and how can you help them?

You saw an advertisement in a newspaper asking for volunteers for a charity event. write a letter to the organizer that do you have interest in this, do you have any previous experiences and how can you help them? lj56X

Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to know the process of joining as a volunteer for the charity event, which I saw in an advertisement that is going to happen soon. I am very interested in these types of social activities because I believe that If we help others we will surely get help from others, whether as a help of money or any kind of other stuff. I saw in an advertisement that this charity event is for orphan children which is the main reason for me to take an interest. Because when I was 18 years old I used to work at an orphanage during summer vacations. So I know better how this charity matters for them. Because as a worker there I used to arrange the charity events for the orphan children. I had spent almost every summer during my university school doing the charities. I can help you in many ways because I have previous experience with me so I can tell you the ways we can encourage people to do charity. Even I know some of the organizations which can sponsor us while doing these events. I am waiting for your reply so that we can help needy kids together. Yours Faithfully, Harmanpreet Singh.

Dear Sir,

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charity
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event
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saw
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soon
.

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very
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because
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help
 others we will surely
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get
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help
 from others, whether as a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadviceuseservicesupportcomforthand
help
 of money or any kind of other stuff. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 in an advertisement that this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfundphilanthropyendowmentdonation
charity
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionhappening
event
 is for orphan children which is the main reason for me to take an interest.

“Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
 when I was 18 years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
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used
 to work at an orphanage during summer vacations. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 I know better how this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfundphilanthropyendowmentdonation
charity
 matters for them. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
 as a worker there I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to arrange the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfundphilanthropyendowmentdonation
charity
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionshappenings
events
 for the orphan children. I had spent almost every summer during my university school doing the charities.

I can You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadviceuseservicesupportcomforthand
help
 you in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
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because
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so
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tell
 you the ways we can encourage This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 to do You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfundphilanthropyendowmentdonation
charity
. Even I know If the text is a generality, 'of the' is not necessary. Did you mean "some"?some
some of the
 organizations which can sponsor us while doing these This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionshappenings
events
.

I am waiting for your reply This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that we can You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadviceuseservicesupportcomforthand
help
 needy kids together.

Yours Faithfully
,

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Harmanpreet
 Singh. 