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You live in an apartment building but are having trouble with the behavior of your neighbors. Write a letter to inform the building manager of the situation. In your letter, • explain who you are • describe the situation concerning your neighbors’ behavior • suggest how the situation could be dealt with

You live in an apartment building but are having trouble with the behavior of your neighbors. Write a letter to inform the building manager of the situation. In your letter, • explain who you are • describe the situation concerning your neighbors’ behavior • suggest how the situation could be dealt with QLkJP
Dear Sir Smith, I am writing to you for explaining the situation which is annoying me every weekend at night. My name is Sam Perez I have been living in your building for the last three years on the second floor next to the lifts on the right. I work weekly so, my only time to loose is on weekends but currently it is so impossible due to bustling noises which start at 6 in the morning. Since, I am the leader of residents’ community for me it is a need to handle this situation as the rules for living there allow to play music in specific hours and not so loud. I already had talked to them but they are not conscious about the bad consequences of their behavior. I recommend ask him for an appointment to resolve this situation as soon as possible in order to keep the strength relationship laces in the complex building. Yours faithfully, Sam Perez
Dear Sir Smith,

I am writing to you for explaining the situation which is annoying me every weekend at night.

My name is Sam Perez I have been living in your building for the last three years on the second floor
next
to the lifts on the right. I work weekly
so
, my
only
time to
loose
is on weekends
but
currently
it is
so
impossible due to bustling noises which
start
at 6 in the morning. Since, I am the leader of residents’ community for me it is a need to handle this situation as the
rules
for living there
allow
to play
music in specific hours and not
so
loud. I already had talked to them
but
they are not conscious about the
bad
consequences of their behavior. I recommend ask him for an appointment to resolve this situation as
soon
as possible in order to
keep
the strength relationship laces in the complex building.

Yours
faithfully
,

Sam Perez
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IELTS letter You live in an apartment building but are having trouble with the behavior of your neighbors. Write a letter to inform the building manager of the situation. In your letter, • explain who you are • describe the situation concerning your neighbors’ behavior • suggest how the situation could be dealt with

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
160 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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