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You have recently stayed at a five-star hotel. However, you were dissappointed with the service. Write a complaint letter. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

You have recently stayed at a five-star hotel. However, you were dissappointed with the service. Write a complaint letter. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam, jRY81

Dear Madam. I am writing to complain about your hotel where I spent my holiday. First of all, the room did not clean and water was too cold. My neighbour room was too noisy. I did not sleep for their noise. My room was too hot. Again my room was little. I shouted a waiter. I said him gassy drink and fried meat. However, the food was fried too hardly. I did not eat the meat. I hope you will correct mistakes.

Dear Madam. I am writing to complain about your hotel where I spent my holiday. This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 did not clean and water was too This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chillyfrosty
cold
. My Possible spelling mistake. 'neighbour' is British English.neighbor
neighbour
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 was too noisy. I did not sleep for their noise. My You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 was too hot. Again my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
. I shouted a waiter. I 'Say' cannot be followed by a direct personal object. Did you mean "told"?told
said
 him gassy drink and fried meat. However
, the food was fried
 too The adverb 'hardly' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
hardly
. I did not eat the meat. I hope you will correct mistakes. 