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You received a defective iron recently

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Dear Sir or MadamI am writing to complain about the iron which I recently bought from your shop. After five days later things started to go wrong. On August 8 I went one of your shops in order to buy an iron. As I was looking around the shop, I encountered the item that I expected. I asked shop assistant all information about the iron. Then I decided to purchase it. At first the iron worked properly but five days later, ironing my trousers, the iron was not able to steam at once. Wondering what to do. After that I tried to push the steam down but it did not steam at all. To make matters worse, the iron heated itself too hot to iron. While my wife was doing the ironing, she burnt it due to overheating. I hope You will send me another new one or I will be forced to inform " The Consumer Right ProtectionYours faithfullyAlex Alilion
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writing to complain about the
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iron
which I recently
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from your
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five days later things
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. On August 8 I went one of your
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shops
in order to
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buy
an
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iron
. As I was looking around the
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shop
, I encountered the item that I
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expected
. I asked
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shop
assistant all information about the
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iron
. Then I decided to
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purchase
it. At
first
the
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iron
worked
properly
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but
five days later, ironing my trousers, the
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iron
was not able to steam at once. Wondering what to do. After that I tried to push the steam down
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but
it did not steam at all. To
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make
matters worse, the
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iron
heated itself too hot to
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iron
. While my wife was doing the ironing, she burnt it due to overheating. I hope You will
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send
me another new one or I will
be forced
to inform
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The Consumer Right
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ProtectionYours
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faithfullyAlex
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Alilion
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IELTS letter You received a defective iron recently

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  American English
1 paragraphs
160 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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