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You have promised your boss that you will work some extra hours next week. Due to your family problem you will be unable to fulfil your promise

You have promised your boss that you will work some extra hours next week. Due to your family problem you will be unable to fulfil your promise Nrowj

Dear Mr Johnson I am wring to you to apologise for due to a family problem. Thus, I will be unable to fulfil my promise. I have promised you that I will not be able to work extra hours next week. However, My little son ill as well as Doctors told me to stay at hospital in two weeks. My son is very little that is why I must look after him. I am disgraceful of you, Consequently I could not fulfil my promise in time. Therefore, I can do all of my works after couple of weeks. I believe that you understand me. I try to not happen such situations. I am very sorry for any stress. I will not offer any excuses for my absence. Yours Sincerely. Sara Adam.

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