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You saw an advert asking for volunteers to run a charity event: 1. Explain why you are interested in helping 2. give details suitable past experience 3. suggest ways you might help with the event

You saw an advert asking for volunteers to run a charity event: 1. Explain why you are interested in helping 2. give details suitable past experience 3. suggest ways you might help with the event KJm0
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to express my interest in an advertised position as a volunteer for a charity event. I am a graduate in event management and given an opportunity to collaborate with you, will boost my resume as I am looking for an employment in the same industry. Let me explain my situation. I am currently working as an Intern with "Make-A-Wish" foundation. Where, my role is to schedule and organize meetings with the clients and also make necessary arrangements for their travel and accommodation. I believe that this experience will make me a suitable candidate to the advertised posting. I would be helpful in preparing the schedule of the entire charity event and can also render my service in organizing the stay and refreshments to the delegates who arrive at the event. Thank you for considering my application and I look forward to hearing form you. Yours faithfully, Nithin Reddy.
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to express my interest in an advertised position as a volunteer for a charity
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event
. I am a graduate in
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event
management and
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given
an opportunity to collaborate with you, will boost my resume as I am looking for an employment in the same industry.

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Let
me
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explain
my situation. I am
currently
working as an Intern with
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Make
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foundation. Where, my role is to schedule and organize meetings with the clients and
also
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make
necessary arrangements for their travel and accommodation. I believe that this experience will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
me a suitable candidate to the advertised posting.

I would be helpful in preparing the schedule of the entire charity
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event
and can
also
render my service in organizing the stay and refreshments to the delegates who arrive at the
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event
.

Thank you for considering my application and I look forward to hearing form you.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Nithin
Reddy.

IELTS letter You saw an advert asking for volunteers to run a charity event: 1. Explain why you are interested in helping 2. give details suitable past experience 3. suggest ways you might help with the event

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  American English
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155 words
6.0
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