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You have recently visited a city on vacation and stayed in a hotel. Write a letter to the manager about your stay. In your letter: Give details of your stay What were the high & low points of the hotel What are your suggestions; recommendations and / or complaints about the hotel Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

You have recently visited a city on vacation and stayed in a hotel. Write a letter to the manager about your stay. In your letter: Give details of your stay What were the high & low points of the hotel What are your suggestions; recommendations and / or complaints about the hotel You do NOT need to write any addresses. dayK
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter with regards to my stay at your hotel in London during a vacation on 15 March 2021 for 5 days wherein I was lodged at Room 1501. I was very excited during the trip and I must stay the view from your hotel was exemplary. The size of the room and the quality of linen was also great, however, I wish to bring to your notice about the food that was served there. The menu had so many options but when inquired, only a limited number of dishes were available. I would like to suggest that, as tourists, people prefer to try different types of cuisines and if all the dishes were made available, it would be a great experience. I would be travelling to London again in six months time and would love to stay again in your hotel. I await your prompt action in this matter to make tourists' experiences wonderful. Yours faithfully, Neel Goswami
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter
Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".
with regards to
my stay at your hotel in London during a vacation on 15 March 2021 for 5 days wherein I
was lodged
at Room 1501.

I was
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
excited during the trip and I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
stay the view from your hotel was exemplary. The size of the room and the quality of linen was
also
great,
however
, I wish to bring to your notice about the food that
was served
there. The menu had
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
options
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
when inquired,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
a limited number of dishes were available.

I would like to suggest that, as tourists,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
prefer to try
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
types of cuisines and if all the dishes
were made
available, it would be a great experience. I would be travelling to London again in six months time and would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
to stay again in your hotel.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
await your prompt action in this matter to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
tourists' experiences wonderful.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Neel
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Goswami

IELTS letter You have recently visited a city on vacation and stayed in a hotel. Write a letter to the manager about your stay. In your letter: Give details of your stay What were the high & low points of the hotel What are your suggestions; recommendations and / or complaints about the hotel You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
163 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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