Search
Tools
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

Write a letter to a bus company saying you have left something valuable on the bus and tell them what to do if they find it.

Write a letter to a bus company saying you have left something valuable on the bus and tell them what to do if they find it. n69no

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to inform you that on April 9th I left my suitcase on the train from London to Bristol at 11 a. m. I am quite sure that I got on the train with my suitcase. When I reached the work I realised that I accidentally missed my suitcase on the train beside the seat. It is a new rectangular brown suitcase with two locks. Firthermore there is written my name on the left corner on the front surface. The worst is that all the documents related to my house and car were in it. If you find it, feel free to contact by my mobile phone number +97 7888442 or my e-mail bayimbetovam@mail. ru. I will arrange a pick up with your company. It would also be great if there is possibility to send it via curier service. I will bear the delivery charge. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Your help will be highly appreciated. Yours faithfully, Mekhriban Bayimbetova

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to inform you that on April 9th I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbagsatchel
suitcase
 on the train from London to Bristol at 11 a. m. I am quite sure that I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 on the train with my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbagsatchel
suitcase
. “When” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When
 I reached the work I Possible spelling mistake. 'realised' is British English.realized
realised
 that I accidentally
 missed my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbagsatchel
suitcase
 on the train beside the seat. It is a new rectangular brown You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbagsatchel
suitcase
 with two locks. Possible spelling mistake found.Furthermore
Firthermore
 there is written
 my name on the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 corner on the front surface. The worst is that all the documents related to my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 and car were in it. If you find it, feel free to contact by my mobile phone number +97 7888442 or my e-mail Possible spelling mistake found.
bayimbetovam@mail
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterRu
ru
. I will arrange a pick up with your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
. It would also
 be great if there is possibility to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 it via Possible spelling mistake found.courierCuriecurlerCurrierCuviercrier
curier
 service. I will bear the delivery charge. I look forward to hearing from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
. Your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 will be highly
 appreciated. Yours faithfully
, Possible spelling mistake found.Mehran
Mekhriban
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphBayimbetova.Bayimbetova!Bayimbetova?Bayimbetova:Bayimbetova,Bayimbetova;
Bayimbetova