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You rented a car from the A2B Rental Company. There were a number of problems with the car. You phoned the company a week ago but the problems still haven't been fixed. Write a letter to the company. In your letter: introduce yourself, explain the problem, sqy what actions you would like the company to take.

You rented a car from the A2B Rental Company. There were a number of problems with the car. You phoned the company a week ago but the problems still haven't been fixed. Write a letter to the company. In your letter: introduce yourself, explain the problem, sqy what actions you would like the company to take. Gxk2
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to complain about your car that I rented last week from your company. I discovered that there were a number of issues with a means of transport. I called to your manager a few days ago. Howewer, the problem still has not been resolved. I am Dildora who is your customer. I have been hiring your cars for a long time. Nevertheless, I have never received from your company this unsatisfactory vehicle this period. This can be explained that when I got home, I knew that the steering wheel of car did not work. I also found out that the quality parts of the machine was poor. So I was not satisfied with your product. In addition, I expect to receive a replacement car or have my current car repaired. I hope this problem will be resolved promptly. Look forward to your reply. Yours faithfully, Dildora Gulmurodova. .
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to complain about your
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car
that I rented last week from your
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company
. I discovered that there were a number of issues with a means of transport. I called to your manager a few days ago.
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Howewer
, the problem
still
has not
been resolved
. I am
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Dildora
who is your customer. I have been hiring your
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cars
for a long time.
Nevertheless
, I have never received from your
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company
this unsatisfactory vehicle this period. This can be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explained
that when I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
home, I knew that the steering wheel of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
did not work. I
also
found out that the quality parts of the machine was poor.
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So
I was not satisfied with your product.
In addition
, I
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expect
to receive a replacement
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car
or have my
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current
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car
repaired. I hope this problem will
be resolved
promptly
. Look forward to your reply. Yours
faithfully
,
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Dildora
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Gulmurodova
.
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IELTS letter You rented a car from the A2B Rental Company. There were a number of problems with the car. You phoned the company a week ago but the problems still haven't been fixed. Write a letter to the company. In your letter: introduce yourself, explain the problem, sqy what actions you would like the company to take.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
155 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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