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You recently went to a public event (for example an exhibition, festival, or show) that you think your friend would enjoy. Write a letter to friend. In your letter tell your friend what the event was explain why you think your friend would like the event invite them to come to the event with you

Hello Pooja, I hope you are doing well! Do you remember I was telling you about the event which is going to happen nearby my society? Well, it is here and I went to see what all things they have. I saw there are some dancing and singing events which were fun and audience can also participate on spot. I was amazed that there were some chefs as well who were teaching different cooking style for delicious dishes. When I saw the cooking event, I remembered that you like cooking and eating. There were some professionals who can give you the advice for best cooking practices, and you would love their food with continental varieties. I am planning to go their next week and I saw the poster that people can participate in cooking competition. Why don't you come and participate? , and trust me you will be in the winning race. Let me know if you need any help for the competition, some kind of easy task which I can do. See you buddy in the weekends! We'll have fun. bye, Shamshad
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Pooja
, I hope you are doing well! Do you remember I was telling you about the
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event
which is going to happen nearby my society? Well, it is here and I went to
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see
what all things they have. I
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saw
there are
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some
dancing and singing
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events
which were fun and audience can
also
participate on spot. I
was amazed
that there were
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some
chefs
as well
who were teaching
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different
cooking style for delicious dishes. When I
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saw
the cooking
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event
, I remembered that you like cooking and eating. There were
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
professionals who can give you the advice for best cooking practices, and you would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
their food with continental varieties. I am planning to go their
next
week and I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
saw
the poster that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
can participate in cooking competition. Why don't you
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come
and participate?
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,
and trust me you will be in the winning race.
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Let
me know if you need any
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help
for the competition,
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some
kind of easy task which I can do.
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See
you buddy in the weekends! We'll have fun.

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Shamshad
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IELTS letter You recently went to a public event (for example an exhibition, festival, or show) that you think your friend would enjoy. Write a letter to friend. In your letter tell your friend what the event was explain why you think your friend would like the event invite them to come to the event with you

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182 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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