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You recently stayed with a childhood friend for a few days. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: Thank your friend for letting you stay with them. refer to something enjoyable that you did while staying with him/her invite your friend to visit you

You recently stayed with a childhood friend for a few days. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: Thank your friend for letting you stay with them. refer to something enjoyable that you did while staying with him/her invite your friend to visit you Kkd1
Dear Teena, I hope you are doing great at your job and spending quality time with your family. I am writing this letter to thank you for making my stay pleasant at your place. I am really grateful that you let me reside at your house for a week when, I was on my business trip. The last moment cancellation of hotel had made me very tensed, but your generous help have saved me. I have framed the picture of our game night at your roof top where, you accidentally fell on the ground with food all over you. I have told every single detail of that night to my sister and she laughed whole time. I am inviting you and your family to come to my place to spend your Easter holidays with us. I have plans for each night. Moreover, we will go on a road trip to Great Ocean Road as well because I know you like road trips. I look forward to hearing from you. Pay my regards to your parents Best Regards Khyati Khanna
Dear
Teena
,

I hope you are doing great at your job and spending quality time with your family. I am writing this letter to thank you for making my stay pleasant at your place.

I
am
really
grateful that you
let
me reside at your
house
for a week when, I was on my business trip. The last moment cancellation of hotel had made me
very
tensed,
but
your generous
help
have saved me.

I have framed the picture of our game night at your roof top where, you
accidentally
fell on the ground with food all over you. I have
told
every single detail of that night to my
sister and
she laughed whole time.

I
am inviting you and your family to
come
to my place to spend your Easter holidays with us.
I
have plans for each night.
Moreover
, we will go on a road trip to Great Ocean Road
as well
because
I know you like road trips.

I look forward to hearing from you. Pay my regards to your
parents


Best Regards

Khyati
Khanna
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IELTS letter You recently stayed with a childhood friend for a few days. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: Thank your friend for letting you stay with them. refer to something enjoyable that you did while staying with him/her invite your friend to visit you

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
178 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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