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Dear Sir / Madam I am writing to you to request more information about funds offered by your university. I want to study at your university and it seems that I have the basic conditions. If you know my conditions, you can guide me according to the form prepared on the university website. My conditions and abilities are as follows: I graduated with grades (B-) and (B+) thesis. I have two international and one domestic article and also have IELTS Academic with grade 6. I have relevant work experience for many years which is detailed below: • I am Network Professional and responsible for supporting the entire network for a company with more than 100 nodes. My range of duties is Implementing and maintaining server and network services such as: defining required LAN and WLAN technologies for access delivery and running all MICROSOFT role and services and LINUX services for controlling and monitoring users. • I have coordinated several software contracts and also supervised the equipping of a refinery in southern Iran. Hoping to receive a timely response by the end of this month. Please do not hesitate to contact me for any further inquiries or questions. Yours Faithfully, Ali Bahmani

Dear Sir / Madam

I am writing to you to request more information about funds offered by your university. I want to study at your university and it seems that I have the basic conditions.

If you know my conditions, you can guide me according to the form prepared on the university website. My conditions and abilities are as follows:

I graduated with grades (B-) and (B+) thesis.

I have two international and one domestic article and also
 have IELTS Academic with grade 6.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 have relevant work experience for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 years which is detailed
 below:

•	I am Network Professional and responsible for supporting the entire network for a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 with more than 100 nodes. My range of duties is Implementing and maintaining server and network services such as: defining required LAN and WLAN technologies for access delivery and running all MICROSOFT role and services and LINUX services for controlling and monitoring users.

•	I have coordinated several software contracts and also
 supervised the equipping of a refinery in southern Iran.

Hoping to receive a timely response by the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of this month. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 do not hesitate to contact me for any further
 inquiries or questions.

Yours Faithfully
,

Ali Possible spelling mistake found.Brahmani
Bahmani