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You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating / cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: give details of what went wrong explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time say what action you would like the manager to take

Dear Sir, I am writing to register a complaint for an imperfect facility provided during my stay at your hotel. I booked a room for one night through online portal as, I was on quick visit to one of my business's meeting in your city. While checked in to the room during last evening, I observed that, air condition was not working and the weather was too hot. I immediately informed the reception for change of room or any other solution. Technician visited and did some modifications but the problem persist. I was out of choice as I already paid in advance and it was too late to look for alternate hotel. I could not managed to sleep well throughout the night. Somehow, open windows helped me to take rest but, the noises from the vehicles were quite irritating. I would like to advise you to kindly resolve the air condition system, so guests like me do not not suffer. Yours Faithfully, John

Dear Sir,

I am writing to register a complaint for an imperfect facility provided during my stay at your hotel. I booked a room for one night through online portal as, I was on quick visit to one of my business's meeting in your city. While This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitored
checked
 in to the room during last evening, I observed that, air condition was not working and the weather was too hot.

I immediately informed the reception for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 of room or any other solution. Technician visited and did This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 modifications This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 the problem persist. I was out of choice as I already paid in Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).advance, and
advance and
 it was too late to look for alternate hotel. I could not The modal verb ‘could’ requires the verb’s base form.manage
managed
 to sleep well throughout the night. Somehow, open windows This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assisted
helped
 me to take rest This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
, the noises from the vehicles were quite irritating.

I would like to advise you to kindly resolve the air condition system, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 guests like me do Double negatives are discouraged in standard English. Can you reformulate this phrase or is a comma missing?
not not
 suffer.

Yours Faithfully
,

John