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You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company.

Dear Mr. John, I am writing this letter regarding my work off for this week. Since, I have been enrolled at university for studying my Master's in Management course, this has come to the last step in the process. I have to complete my final exam this coming week certainly, I need some time to prepare. I can guaranty you that I will be doing an extra hour's if needed later at work. For Instance, loading up the stock in advance and also work in the place of a person who will be working at my shift in my absence. As a request, Please consider my obligation, I would assure you that this degree which I am about to complete next week will help boost my career in many ways such as promoting me to a manager level from the work which I am doing right now. It will be an added advantage for me as well as our company. I am looking forward to hearing for your reply. Yours Sincerely, Raghu.
Dear Mr. John,

I am writing this letter regarding my
work
off for this week. Since, I have
been enrolled
at university for studying my Master's in Management course, this has
come
to the last step in the process. I
have to
complete my final exam this coming week
certainly
, I need
some
time to prepare.

I can guaranty you that I will be doing an extra hour's if needed later at
work
.
For Instance
, loading up the stock in advance and
also
work
in the place of a person who will be working at my shift in my absence.

As a request,
Please
consider my obligation, I would assure you that this degree which I am about to complete
next
week will
help
boost my career in
many
ways such as promoting me to a manager level from the
work
which I am doing right
now
. It will be an
added
advantage for me
as well
as our
company
.

I am looking forward to hearing for your reply.

Yours
Sincerely
,

Raghu
.
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IELTS letter You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company.

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  American English
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172 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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