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Some people say that modern technology has made shopping today easier, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion You should write at least 250 words.

Dear Friend, Hope my letter finds you in good health. It is a good decision to learn driving at this point as we are desperate to avoid it. I would strongly recommend to enroll yourself in the driving school "ABC" as it has the most experienced people to help you. Also, they aid you in applying for a driving license which is an added advantage. I would suggest you get the learners’ license before you start with the classes. Once you start with your driving classes, please ensure to practice it daily to catch the things easily. Make sure to wear the seat belt and drive the vehicle slowly as safety should be our priority. Driving your own vehicle will help you in saving time and get out of the hassle of waiting for a cab. I would love to see you driving all your way down here to have some fun. Yours faithfully, Apurvaveda D R
Dear Friend,

Hope my letter finds you in
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health. It is a
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good
decision to learn
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driving
at this point as we are desperate to avoid it. I would
strongly
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recommend to enroll
yourself in the
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driving
school
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"
ABC
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"
as it has the most experienced
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people
to
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help
you.
Also
, they aid you in applying for a
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driving
license which is an
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added
advantage.

I would suggest you
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get
the learners’ license
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before
you
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start
with the classes. Once you
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start
with your
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driving
classes,
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please
ensure to practice it daily to catch the things
easily
.
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Make
sure to wear the seat belt and drive the vehicle
slowly
as safety should be our priority.

Driving your
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own
vehicle will
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help
you in saving time and
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get
out of the hassle of waiting for a cab. I would
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love
to
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see
you
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
driving
all your way down here to have
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some
fun.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Apurvaveda
D R

IELTS letter Some people say that modern technology has made shopping today easier, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
156 words
6.0
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