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You recently received furniture that was already damaged at the time of arrival. Write a letter to the manager of the shipping company about it and say: What furniture did you order? What was the damage? Suggest what needs to be done about it.

I am writing this letter to express the level of my happiness after receiving the blue color sofa on time. I have never had trust online sites before but after my friend's insistence, I had recently made an order on your portal which I badly needed that is an elegant blue color sofa. I must say this is one stop shop for all furniture especially if someone is seeking for exclusive variety. The sofa came to me to days before and was entirely same as shown in the picture even it was more stunning. However, I appreciate the prompt delivery service along with that, the delivery persons were so nice and patient. They handled it so wisely and managed to bring such a huge sofa inside without even damaging floor and did not get even a single scratch on walls. Apart from this they almost took more than two hours to fix it. As they provided me the first-rate service so I rewarded them with $50 tip to each. Lastly, I must say that I got an incredible experience and so much glad that my friend recommended me such a worthy website. I have decided that not only I will bring customers to you, I already placed couple of more orders and expecting the same service. Yours Sincerely, Srishti
I am writing this letter to express the level of my happiness after receiving the blue color
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sofa
on time. I have never had trust online sites
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
after my friend's insistence, I had recently made an order on your portal which I
badly
needed
that is
an elegant blue color
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sofa
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
say this is one
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stop
shop for all furniture
especially
if someone is seeking for exclusive variety. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sofa
came to me to days
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
and was
entirely
same as shown in the picture even it was more stunning.
However
, I appreciate the prompt delivery service along with that, the delivery persons were
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
nice and patient. They handled it
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
wisely
and managed to bring such a huge
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sofa
inside without even damaging floor and did not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
even a single scratch on walls. Apart from this they almost took more than two hours to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fix
it. As they provided me the
first
-rate service
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
I rewarded them with $50 tip to each.
Lastly
, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
say that I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
an incredible experience and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
much glad that my friend recommended me such a worthy website. I have decided that not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
I will bring customers to you, I already placed
It seems that an article is missing.
couple of
more orders and expecting the same service. Yours
Sincerely
,
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph.
Srishti
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IELTS letter You recently received furniture that was already damaged at the time of arrival. Write a letter to the manager of the shipping company about it and say: What furniture did you order? What was the damage? Suggest what needs to be done about it.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
218 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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