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You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or try to get a job.You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: say why she/he would not enjoy going to college. explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her

You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: say why she/he would not enjoy going to college. explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her 3don

Dear Samuel, I received your letter two days ago and I heard that you can’t decide whether you should get a job or go to college. I think getting a job would be the better option for you. Let me tell you why. As I’ve known you since childhood I think I know your interests and needs very well. All these years, I have seen you showing more interest in doing things than learning lessons. You used to be always busy doing the practical stuff like fixing cars. As a result, you had very poor classroom attendance. This makes me feel strong that university is not suitable for you. Even if you join, you are more likely to drop out. Getting a job will not only help your interests but also enable you to earn some good money. Your family financial situation makes me feel this is the right choice for you. With the knowledge and skills you have, I think you could easily get a job in the automobile industry and I’m pretty sure that within a few years you will be able to establish yourself as a successful mechanic. I hope my advice helps you. Best wishes, Sandeep

Dear Samuel,

I received your letter two days ago and I heard that you can’t decide whether you should This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
job
 or go to college. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 getting a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
job
 would be the better option for you.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
Let
 me This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 you why. As I’ve known you since childhood I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 I know your interests and needs This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 well. All these years, I have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 you showing more interest in doing things than learning lessons. You This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to be always busy doing the practical stuff like fixing cars. As a result
, you had This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 poor classroom attendance. This This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 me feel strong that university is not suitable for you. Even if you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
, you are more likely to drop out.

Getting a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
job
 will not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 your interests This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 enable you to earn This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 money. Your family financial situation This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 me feel this is the right choice for you.

With the knowledge and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 you have, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 you could easily
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
job
The usual preposition for "get a job" is "with" for an organization. Revise: "with the automobile".with the automobile
in the automobile
 industry and I’m pretty sure that within a few years you will be able to establish yourself as a successful mechanic. I hope my advice This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 you.

Best wishes,

Sandeep