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Dear Sir or Madam I am writing to express my disappointment with the service I received during a visit to your hotel last week. Firstly, we had booked five rooms for a business trip with our colleagues, however, when we arrived at the hotel the rooms that we booked were not ready at all. We had to wait an hour in the waiting room. Such a careless service seems to us inexcusable. Then, although the hotel is new, the facilities are ancient-fashioned. We needed to do our next plans in consultation with our office via the internet. Unfortunately, the quality of the internet was unbearable. As a result, it affected our work. As regular clients of your hotel, we felt disappointed with the way we have been treated and hope steps will be taken to rectify the situation. I trust this matter will receive your immediate attention Yours faithfully Micheal Burrow
Dear Sir or Madam

I am writing to express my disappointment with the service I received during a visit to your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hotel
last week.

Firstly
, we had booked five rooms for a business trip with our colleagues,
however
, when we arrived at the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hotel
the rooms that we booked were not ready at all. We had to wait an hour in the waiting room. Such a careless service seems to us inexcusable.

Then, although the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hotel
is new, the facilities are ancient-fashioned. We needed to do our
next
plans in consultation with our office via the internet. Unfortunately, the quality of the internet was unbearable.
As a result
, it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
affected
our work.

As regular clients of your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hotel
, we felt disappointed with the way we have
been treated
and hope steps will
be taken
to rectify the situation.

I trust this matter will receive your immediate attention

Yours
faithfully


Micheal Burrow
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IELTS letter write to the hotel manager

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  American English
8 paragraphs
150 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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