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You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home write a letter to the council in your letter say how you heard about the plan explain how you feel about it ask for more information about it

You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home write a letter to the council in your letter say how you heard about the plan explain how you feel about it ask for more information about it 8W1k
Dear Sir/Madam, I am Alin Treesa, residents' association president of ward 15, writing this letter on behalf of the inhabitants to enquire about the new shopping complex which is planned to construct in our locality. I came to know regarding this project as one of the architects who designed the mall is my friend. Though the start of a shopping centre brings development to our locality, we are concerned about the consequences of construction. The only source of water which we relies on for our domestic purposes is adjacent to this plot. The over exploitation of resources may lead to the scarcity and the construction work can result in polluting water. Since we are bothered about the problems related to the work, I would appreciate if you could provide the information regarding the waste management system and also the plans to tackle the water scarcity. I kindly request you to consider our worries regarding the effect of this project and please do the needful. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Alin Treesa
Dear Sir/Madam, I am
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Alin
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Treesa
, residents' association president of ward 15, writing this letter on behalf of the inhabitants to
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enquire
about the new shopping complex which
is planned
to construct in our locality. I came to know regarding this project as one of the architects who designed the mall is my friend. Though the
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start
of a shopping
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centre
brings development to our locality, we
are concerned
about the consequences of construction. The
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
source of water which we
The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: "rely"
relies
on for our domestic purposes is adjacent to this plot. The over exploitation of resources may lead to the scarcity and the construction work can result in polluting water. Since we
are bothered
about the problems related to the work, I would appreciate if you could provide the information regarding the waste management system and
also
the plans to tackle the water scarcity. I kindly request you to consider our worries regarding the effect of this project and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
do the needful. Looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,
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Alin
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Treesa
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IELTS letter You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home write a letter to the council in your letter say how you heard about the plan explain how you feel about it ask for more information about it

Letter
  American English
2 paragraphs
173 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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