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You recently noticed a local restaurant that was offering a part-time job. Write a letter to the restaurant’s manager. In your letter, – explain that you would like to apply for the job – give some details of any relevant experience that you have – specify the days and times that would suit you

You recently noticed a local restaurant that was offering a part-time job. Write a letter to the restaurant’s manager. In your letter, – explain that you would like to apply for the job – give some details of any relevant experience that you have – specify the days and times that would suit you Aknx

Dear Sir/ Madam, I am writing with respect to the job opportunity at your esteemed restaurant, that was published last week in Times newspaper. I would like to apply for the part time role and would highly appreciate if you can consider my application. I am currently studying PG Diploma from Humber College and looking to work part time to cover my living expenses during the academic year. I had 8 months experience of working as a waiter in the Thames restaurant at New-York in 2018, where I was pursuing my graduation. The roles and responsibilities mentioned in the Job posting is similar to what I was doing at the Thames and hence I feel, I am an ideal candidate for the role. I attend my College from Monday to Friday from 8: 00 am to 12: 30: pm. If given the opportunity, I can work from 2: 00 pm during the weekdays and from 9: 00 am during the weekends. Hoping for a positive response. Thanking you. Yours Sincerely,

Dear Sir/ Madam,

I am writing with respect to the job opportunity at your esteemed restaurant, that was published
 last week in Times newspaper. I would like to apply for the This word is normally spelled with hyphen.part-time
part time
 role and would highly
 appreciate if you can consider my application.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am currently
 studying PG Diploma from Humber College and looking to work This word is normally spelled with hyphen.part-time
part time
 to cover my living expenses during the academic year. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 had 8 months experience of working as a waiter in the Thames restaurant at New-York in 2018, where I was pursuing my graduation. The roles and responsibilities mentioned in the Job posting is similar to what I was doing at the Thames and hence
 I feel, I am an ideal candidate for the role.

I attend my College from Monday to Friday from 8: 00 am to 12: 30: pm. If This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 the opportunity, I can work from 2: 00 pm during the weekdays and from 9: 00 am during the weekends.

Hoping for a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 response.

Thanking you.

Yours Sincerely
, 

IELTS letter You recently noticed a local restaurant that was offering a part-time job. Write a letter to the restaurant’s manager. In your letter, – explain that you would like to apply for the job – give some details of any relevant experience that you have – specify the days and times that would suit you

Letter

American English

7 paragraphs

170 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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