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You recently noticed a local restaurant that was offering a part-time job. Write a letter to the restaurant’s manager. In your letter, – explain that you would like to apply for the job – give some details of any relevant experience that you have – specify the days and times that would suit you

You recently noticed a local restaurant that was offering a part-time job. Write a letter to the restaurant’s manager. In your letter, – explain that you would like to apply for the job – give some details of any relevant experience that you have – specify the days and times that would suit you Aknx
Dear Sir/ Madam, I am writing with respect to the job opportunity at your esteemed restaurant, that was published last week in Times newspaper. I would like to apply for the part time role and would highly appreciate if you can consider my application. I am currently studying PG Diploma from Humber College and looking to work part time to cover my living expenses during the academic year. I had 8 months experience of working as a waiter in the Thames restaurant at New-York in 2018, where I was pursuing my graduation. The roles and responsibilities mentioned in the Job posting is similar to what I was doing at the Thames and hence I feel, I am an ideal candidate for the role. I attend my College from Monday to Friday from 8: 00 am to 12: 30: pm. If given the opportunity, I can work from 2: 00 pm during the weekdays and from 9: 00 am during the weekends. Hoping for a positive response. Thanking you. Yours Sincerely,
Dear Sir/ Madam,

I am writing with respect to the job opportunity at your esteemed restaurant, that
was published
last week in Times newspaper. I would like to apply for the
part time
role and would
highly
appreciate if you can consider my application.

I
am
currently
studying PG Diploma from Humber College and looking to work
part time
to cover my living expenses during the academic year.
I
had 8 months experience of working as a waiter in the Thames restaurant at New-York in 2018, where I was pursuing my graduation. The roles and responsibilities mentioned in the Job posting is similar to what I was doing at the Thames and
hence
I feel, I am an ideal candidate for the role.

I attend my College from Monday to Friday from 8: 00 am to 12: 30: pm. If
given
the opportunity, I can work from 2: 00 pm during the weekdays and from 9: 00 am during the weekends.

Hoping for a
positive
response.

Thanking you.

Yours
Sincerely
,
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IELTS letter You recently noticed a local restaurant that was offering a part-time job. Write a letter to the restaurant’s manager. In your letter, – explain that you would like to apply for the job – give some details of any relevant experience that you have – specify the days and times that would suit you

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
170 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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