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You are looking for a full-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter: introduce yourself explain what sort of job you would like say what experience and skills you have Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir/Madam You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

You are looking for a full-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter: introduce yourself explain what sort of job you would like say what experience and skills you have Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir/Madam M6lp
Dear sir/madam I am writing this letter to inform you that i am looking for a full-time job in your company. I completed my diploma of associate of business management from the columbia college and i gained enough experience for my desired job. I would like to get the job in accounting department as i studied everything related to this duties. Moreover, it is my dream to work for your company at this post because it requires exactly the same skills which i already have and i will work with full dedication. I attached my previous work experience letter from my ex-manager from where i worked more than two years on same post. Additionally, i can speak and write three languages which are english, hindi and punjabi. Because of this, i can handle people from different cultures. I will always give my best on work and will not give any chance of dissatisfaction to the company. I am looking forward to hear from you soon. Your's faithfully Gurleen Jawandha
Dear sir/madam

I am writing this letter to inform you that
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am looking for a full-time job in your
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company
. I completed my diploma of associate of business management from the
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columbia
college and
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i
gained
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enough
experience for my desired job.

I would like to
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get
the job in accounting department as
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i
studied everything related to
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this
duties.
Moreover
, it is my dream to
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work
for your
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company
at this post
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because
it requires exactly the same
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skills
which
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i
already have and
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i
will
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work
with full dedication.

I attached my previous
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work
experience letter from my ex-manager from where
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i
worked more than two years on same post.
Additionally
,
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i
can speak and write three languages which are
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english
,
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hindi
and
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punjabi
.
Because of this
,
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i
can handle
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people
from
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different
cultures. I will always give my best on
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work
and will not give any chance of dissatisfaction to the
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company
.

I am looking forward
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to hear
from you
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soon
.

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Your's
faithfully


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Gurleen
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Jawandha

IELTS letter You are looking for a full-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter: introduce yourself explain what sort of job you would like say what experience and skills you have Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir/Madam

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
168 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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