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You recently had a suprising experience. Write a letter to your friend in England, explaining why you were surpised, and saying how you felt about it afterwards. Write between 150 and 200 words.

Hi Susan, Thank you so much for all the presents you sent me. They're awesome! I have a story-time for you. I thought that we aren't going to celebrate my birthday this year, but guess what happened! My friends threw me a suprise birthday party! When I got home from school, all my friends jumped out and yelled 'Suprise! '. I was so shoked! I didn't think that this would happened to me. They even baked me a big cake and put on it sixteen candles. We put on some music and danced to it for hours. After that we were quite tired, so we watched old videos of ourselves. They were hilarious and embarrassing at the same time. Unfortunately the next day was school, so they had to go home. I’m so sorry that you couldn’t be here, it was so much fun. I hope that we can meet soon. Love you, Noémi

Hi Susan,

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so
 much for all the presents you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 me. They're awesome!

I have a story-time for you.

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thought
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but
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suprise
 birthday party! When I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 home from school, all my friends jumped out and yelled 'Possible spelling mistake found.SurpriseSunriseSup riseUprise
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! '. I was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
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shoked
! I didn't This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
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happened
 to me. They even baked me a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 cake and put on it sixteen candles. We put on This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 music and danced to it for hours. After that we were quite tired, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitored
watched
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old
 videos of ourselves. They were hilarious and embarrassing at the same time. Unfortunately the next
 day was school, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 they had to go home.

I’m This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 sorry that you couldn’t be here, it was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 much fun.

I hope that we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
Love
 you,

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Noémi