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You recently discovered that there are plans to construct an airport in your locality. Write a letter to the local authority. In your letter – Explain how you came to know about the plans – Describe the negative effect of the construction on your neighborhood – Suggest a possible solution to the problem.

Dear sir or madam, I am writing this letter to express my grave concern about building an airport in my locality, ‘Green Avenue. ’It was a bolt from the blue when one of my friends informed me that he has got a contract for an airport’s refurbishment. I want to tell you that this construction will hurt the health of the people who live there. Firstly, it will make people sedentary as people use this place for jogging, running and in the evening they do walk. If the airport is constructed; then, there would be Chaos, and it would be hard to live to owe to loud noises by airplanes. It would be a good idea to renovate it at the outskirts of the city. There is plenty of vacant space, and people would not suffer from noise and air pollution. The place is already congested and so building an airport will make the situation worse. I would appreciate it if you could look into the matter at your earliest convenience. Yours Faithfully
Dear sir or madam, I am writing this letter to express my grave concern about building an
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airport
in my locality, ‘Green Avenue. ’It was a bolt from the blue when one of my friends informed me that he has
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got
a contract for an
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airport’s
refurbishment. I want to
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tell
you that this construction will hurt the health of the
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people
who
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live
there.
Firstly
, it will
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make
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people
sedentary as
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people
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use
this place for jogging, running and in the evening they do walk. If the
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airport
is constructed
; then, there would be Chaos, and it would be
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hard
to
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live
to owe to loud noises by airplanes. It would be a
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good
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idea
to renovate it at the outskirts of the city. There is
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plenty
of vacant space, and
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people
would not suffer from noise and air pollution. The place is already congested and
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so
building an
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airport
will
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make
the situation worse. I would appreciate it if you could look into the matter at your earliest convenience. Yours
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Faithfully

IELTS letter You recently discovered that there are plans to construct an airport in your locality. Write a letter to the local authority. In your letter – Explain how you came to know about the plans – Describe the negative effect of the construction on your neighborhood – Suggest a possible solution to the problem.

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  American English
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6.0
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