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During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter,remind him when and where you met tell him what kind of job you are interested in say why you think you would be suitable for the job

Dear Mr Smith, My name is Sunil and we met last week on a SpiceJet flight from Hyderabad to Delhi. I was sitting next to you on the flight and after we got introduced, we had a brief discussion about my work experience, and you suggested a possible job opening in one of your restaurants. I would like to offer my candidacy as an accountant in your restaurant and I believe I can serve the possible with dedication. Currently, I am working as an accountant at the Trident hotel. I have a master’s degree in commerce and a diploma in hospitality management. I am looking for a job where I can manage the entire accounting portfolio of all restaurants. I believe this position is an exact match of my skill sets as I have more than ten years of relevant experience in accounting and hospitality domains. I would really appreciate if you could go through my profile and let me know your thoughts about the possible job. Thank you so much for your time and consideration, and I look forward to hearing from you soon. Warm RegardsMandeep Singh
Dear Mr Smith,

My name is
Sunil and
we met last week on a
SpiceJet
flight from Hyderabad to Delhi. I was sitting
next
to you on the flight and after we
got
introduced, we had a brief discussion about my work experience, and you suggested a possible job opening in one of your restaurants.

I would like to offer my candidacy as an accountant in your restaurant and I believe I can serve the possible with dedication.
Currently
, I am working as an accountant at the Trident hotel. I have a master’s degree in commerce and a diploma in hospitality management. I am looking for a job where I can manage the entire accounting portfolio of all restaurants.

I
believe this position is an exact match of my
skill
sets as I have more than ten years of relevant experience in accounting and hospitality domains.
I
would
really
appreciate if you could go through my profile and
let
me know your thoughts about the possible job.

Thank you
so
much for your time and consideration, and I look forward to hearing from you
soon
.

Warm
RegardsMandeep
Singh
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IELTS letter During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter, remind him when and where you met tell him what kind of job you are interested in say why you think you would be suitable for the job

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
187 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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