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During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter,remind him when and where you met tell him what kind of job you are interested in say why you think you would be suitable for the job

Dear Mr. BrownIt was a pleasure meeting you during our plane journey from London to New York earlier this week. I am writing to you with reference to our conversation regarding a possible job opening of a restaurant manager in one of your restaurants which might be of my interest. As I mentioned to you, I specialize in managing the supply and logistics department. I have a vast experience in Supply chain management. In my current job also, I am heading the supply department of one of the esteem grocery brand of New York, Bateel. As a head of the department, I look after the stock inventory, supervising the shelf life of the products in the store and managing the orders placed. Additionally, I also look into client success management where I look into the client experience journey, managing client expectations and looking into their grievances. With my skills and experience, I think I would be a suitable match for the vacancy and I can use my knowledge and expertise to manage the restaurant, both operationally and functionally. Looking forward to hearing from you. Warm RegardsMandeep Singh
Dear Mr.
BrownIt
was a pleasure meeting you during our
plane
journey from London to New York earlier this week. I am writing to you with reference to our conversation regarding a possible job opening of a restaurant manager in one of your restaurants which might be of my interest.

As I mentioned to you, I specialize in managing the supply and logistics department. I have a vast experience in Supply chain management. In my
current
job
also
, I am heading the supply department of one of the esteem grocery brand of New York,
Bateel
. As a head of the department, I look after the stock inventory, supervising the shelf life of the products in the store and managing the orders placed.
Additionally
, I
also
look into client success management where I look into the client experience journey, managing client expectations and looking into their grievances.

With my
skills
and experience, I
think
I would be a suitable match for the vacancy and I can
use
my knowledge and expertise to manage the restaurant, both
operationally
and
functionally
.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Warm
RegardsMandeep
Singh
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IELTS letter During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter, remind him when and where you met tell him what kind of job you are interested in say why you think you would be suitable for the job

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
186 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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