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You live on the fourth floor of five- story building which is not equipped with an elevator.

You live on the fourth floor of five- story building which is not equipped with an elevator. 1AlQL
Dear neighbors. If you do not me let's introduce myself. I have been living here for 5 years, I am very busy for dely works so we do not meet with you often. My work demand me become faster in the morning I have need to an elevator because I have late for work sometimes. I am writing to tell you about where we staying flats elevator is not evailabl and I would appreciate if you are agree with my offer about repairing its equipment it could be cozy for me and your. Please think about this solution and give me your answer. However, we have small children, they had to go kindergarten and we hurry as car it can be comfortable for them. I hope you accept my request and do solve this issue together. I will be so glad to think my opinion, it's for our facilities and comfort. Sorry to bother you, your help will be greatly appreciated. Sincerely yours. Sandy Lee.
Dear neighbors.
If
you do not me
let
's introduce myself. I have been living here for 5 years, I am
very
busy for
dely
works
so
we do not
meet
with you
often
. My work demand me become faster in the morning I have need to an elevator
because
I have late for work
sometimes
.

I am writing to
tell
you about where
we staying
flats elevator is not
evailabl
and I would appreciate if you are
agree
with my offer about repairing its equipment it could be cozy for me and your.
Please
think
about this solution and give me your answer.
However
, we have
small
children, they had to go
kindergarten and
we hurry as car it can be comfortable for them. I hope you accept my request and do solve this issue together. I will be
so
glad to
think
my opinion, it's for our facilities and comfort. Sorry to bother you, your
help
will be
greatly
appreciated.
Sincerely
yours. Sandy Lee.
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IELTS letter You live on the fourth floor of five- story building which is not equipped with an elevator.

Letter
  American English
2 paragraphs
165 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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