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You live on the fourth floor of five- story building which is not equipped with an elevator.

You live on the fourth floor of five- story building which is not equipped with an elevator. 1AlQL

Dear neighbors. If you do not me let's introduce myself. I have been living here for 5 years, I am very busy for dely works so we do not meet with you often. My work demand me become faster in the morning I have need to an elevator because I have late for work sometimes. I am writing to tell you about where we staying flats elevator is not evailabl and I would appreciate if you are agree with my offer about repairing its equipment it could be cozy for me and your. Please think about this solution and give me your answer. However, we have small children, they had to go kindergarten and we hurry as car it can be comfortable for them. I hope you accept my request and do solve this issue together. I will be so glad to think my opinion, it's for our facilities and comfort. Sorry to bother you, your help will be greatly appreciated. Sincerely yours. Sandy Lee.

Dear neighbors. “If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
 you do not me This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
's introduce myself. I have been living here for 5 years, I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 busy for Possible spelling mistake found.delaydenyrelyDeldulyDell
dely
 works This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 we do not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 with you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
often
. My work demand me become faster in the morning I have need to an elevator This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I have late for work This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
sometimes
.

I am writing to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 you about where Did you mean "we're staying", "we are staying", or "we were staying"?we're stayingwe are stayingwe were staying
we staying
 flats elevator is not Possible spelling mistake found.available
evailabl
 and I would appreciate if you are Consider using a past participle here: "agreed".agreed
agree
 with my offer about repairing its equipment it could be cozy for me and your. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 about this solution and give me your answer. However
, we have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 children, they had to go Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).kindergarten, and
kindergarten and
 we hurry as car it can be comfortable for them. I hope you accept my request and do solve this issue together. I will be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 glad to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 my opinion, it's for our facilities and comfort. Sorry to bother you, your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 will be greatly
 appreciated. Sincerely
 yours. Sandy Lee. 