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You recently attended a meeting at a hotel . When you returned home , you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter *say where you think you left the papers *explain why they are so important *tell the manager what you want him to do.

You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter *say where you think you left the papers *explain why they are so important *tell the manager what you want him to do. nQk2
Dear Sir, Hello, I have a repuest to your hotel. I have been there and I hope you to remember that I conference your hotel few days ago. My name is Peter and room no. is 707. the date is start 12/02/14. Actually I lost my report for presentation. That is total 280paper. It was specially requested to Japan Uni for 1 month. I'll using the report when I get a level of doctor. I have no enough time for collected report again. Because the presentation will be opened after 4 days. I really want finding the report, and I belive you already have it when you before reading this mail. Protect the lost goods is due the hotels. And already it's a law. When you finished reading it, then just call me or leave your message to my asistant. I have a plan that when I finised the presentation, I'll be go there again for celerbrat party with my friends. Generally. . . . . .
Dear Sir, Hello,

I have a
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repuest
to your hotel. I have been there and I hope you to remember that I conference your hotel few days ago. My name is Peter and room no. is 707.
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date is
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start
12/02/14. Actually I lost my
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report
for presentation.
That is
total 280paper. It was
specially
requested to Japan Uni for 1 month. I'll
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using
the
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report
when I
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get
a level of doctor.

I have no
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enough
time for collected
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report
again.
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Because
the presentation will
be opened
after 4 days. I
really
want
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finding
the
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report
, and
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I belive
you already have it when you
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before
reading this mail.

Protect the lost
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goods
is due the hotels.

And already it's a law. When you finished reading it, then
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just
call me or
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leave
your message to my
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asistant
. I have a plan that when I
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finised
the presentation, I'll be
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go
there again for
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celerbrat
party with my friends.

Generally
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IELTS letter You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter *say where you think you left the papers *explain why they are so important *tell the manager what you want him to do.

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