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You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter,

You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter, jeML
Dear Sir/Madam, I recently attended a meeting at your hotel, and I am writing with regard to some documents that I left in your hotel yesterday. I am Hie, and I stayed at room B305 at your hotel from the 12nd to 15th. This time, I had an important conference at room M307. Unfortunately, when I came home, I realised I forgot some documents at your hotel, so it may be in B307 when I left. All of these documents are placed inside a blue folder with my name “Ms. Hie Nguyen” written on it. Since these documents contain some important information about my company, I really appreciate it if you could help me to find it and let me know as soon as possible. If you find it, could you send it to my company on delivery and let me know the cost and your bank account which I could pay for your support. Please kindly update any information about it for me. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Thank you in advance. Yours faithfully, Hie.
Dear Sir/Madam,

I recently attended a meeting at your
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hotel
, and I am writing with regard to
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some
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documents
that I
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left
in your
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hotel
yesterday.

I am Hie, and I stayed at room B305 at your
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hotel
from the 12nd to 15th. This time, I had an
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important
conference at room M307. Unfortunately, when I came home, I
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realised
I forgot
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some
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documents
at your
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hotel
,
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so
it may be in B307 when I
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left
. All of these
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documents
are placed
inside a blue folder with my name “Ms. Hie Nguyen” written on it.

Since these
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documents
contain
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some
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important
information about my
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company
, I
really
appreciate it if you could
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help me to find
it and
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let
me know as
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soon
as possible. If you find it, could you
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send
it to my
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company
on delivery and
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let
me know the cost and your bank account which I could pay for your support.

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Please
kindly update any information about it for me. I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Thank you in advance.

Yours
faithfully
,

Hie.
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IELTS letter You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter,

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
179 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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