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You own an old item that you think is valuable and would like to sell. Write a letter to the owner of antiquis shop. Explain how you find the shop. Describe the item that you would like to sell. Say how much you would like to sell the item for.

You own an old item that you think is valuable and would like to sell. Write a letter to the owner of antiquis shop. Explain how you find the shop. Describe the item that you would like to sell. Say how much you would like to sell the item for. Dejo
Dear Mr. kapoor, I am Jyoti Dahiya frim Delhi. Last year a friend of mine from Gujrat brought a antique furniture frim your shop. He only refer mecto contaxt you because I have an old telephone. Which is very valuable but I want to sell that. This telephone will be approx 100 years older, my great grandfather used to use that phone to communicate but my father and next me keept that very safely and in pretty good condition. One more important thing which I would like to tell you about the price what I am expecting for this phone would be 20000 rupees. I hope you understand better about the values of these precious items. For further detail please free to contact me on my mobile. my number is 9898653579. I look forward to your reply. Your Trully, Jyoti
Dear Mr.
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kapoor
, I am
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Jyoti
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Dahiya
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frim
Delhi. Last year a friend of mine from
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Gujrat
brought
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a
antique furniture
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frim
your shop. He
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only
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refer
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mecto
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contaxt
you
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because
I have an
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old
telephone. Which is
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very
valuable
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but
I want to sell that. This telephone will be approx 100 years older, my great grandfather
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used
to
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use
that phone to communicate
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but
my father and
next
me
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keept
that
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very
safely
and in pretty
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good
condition. One more
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important
thing which I would like to
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tell
you about the price what I am expecting for this phone would be 20000 rupees. I hope you understand better about the values of these precious items. For
further
detail
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please
free to contact me on my mobile.
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my
number is 9898653579. I look forward to your reply. Your
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Trully
,
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Jyoti

IELTS letter You own an old item that you think is valuable and would like to sell. Write a letter to the owner of antiquis shop. Explain how you find the shop. Describe the item that you would like to sell. Say how much you would like to sell the item for.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
139 words
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