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Hello! I am glad for the opportunity to introduce myself. I am Ngoc Anh and my full name is Pham Ngoc Anh. I was born and raised in Hai Duong province, where is 60 kilometers from Hanoi Capital. I am a junior student at Electric Power University. My major is Business Administration. I chose this major because it was my dream job since I was a child. My desire after graduating from this major is that I will become a Chief Executive Officer and Founder of a large corporation working in the field of Technology and Fashion.

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