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A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with her on your next holiday you are busy to accept the invitation write a letter to your friend thank him her for the invitation explain why you cannot come ask him her about other times to visit

A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with her on your next holiday you are busy to accept the invitation write a letter to your friend thank him her for the invitation explain why you cannot come ask him her about other times to visit QL52P

Dear john, Thank you so much for your invitation. it's really a really generous offer to put me up at your place in toyoko. i would really like to come and it's very kind of you but unfortunately I won't be able to make it due to my hectic work schedule. I have just started a new teaching job, and I have been working around the clock. it's been intense. I don't mean to complain; I have been enjoying it immensely and the school I am working at is actually our old high school, which had been a lot of fun do you remember mrs brown? She is actually my supervisor! Could you let me know if another time I can visit? Because of the school holidays I would be free next week so if you are available then, I would love to escape the cold to visit you I can't wait to hear from you. Your friend, John

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but
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started
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's been intense. I don't mean to complain; I have been enjoying it immensely
 and the school I am working at is actually our This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 high school, which had been This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
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 me know if another time I can visit? This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
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 of the school holidays I would be free next
 week This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 if you are available then, I would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 to escape the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chillyfrosty
cold
 to visit you I can't wait to hear from you. Your friend, Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphJohn.John!John?John:John,John;
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