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You need to take leave from your work of over one month for personal reasons. Write a letter to your boss. In your letter: Explain the reason for the leave and the length of leave you need Explain how you will keep up-to-date while you are away Suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

You need to take leave from your work of over one month for personal reasons. Write a letter to your boss. In your letter: Explain the reason for the leave and the length of leave you need Explain how you will keep up-to-date while you are away Suggest how your work could be covered while you are away xmOob
Dear Mr Smith, I am writing a letter to request an annual leave for a month from 5th March 2020 to 4th April 2020 for family reason. I will travel to Toronto with my husband to take care of my daughter and my grandson. She is pregnant and the expected due date is 13th March. My daughter and son in law do not have any experiences on taking care a baby as this is their first baby. Apart from this, they do not have any relatives in Toronto. It is necessary for me to stay with them and reduce their pressure and burden. I will bring my laptop and check e-mail everyday to make sure that everything goes smooth. You can also reach me while I am away at +1 4560 3210. I will get back to you as soon as possible. In the meantime, my projects will be taken care by Rosie Cheung in my absence. I am grateful if you could approve my leave application. Your sincerely, Annie Leung
Dear Mr Smith,

I am writing a letter to request an annual
leave
for a month from 5th March 2020 to 4th April 2020 for family reason.

I will travel to Toronto with my husband to take care of my daughter and my grandson. She is pregnant and the
expected
due date is 13th March. My daughter and
son in law
do not have any experiences on taking care a baby as this is their
first
baby. Apart from this, they do not have any relatives in Toronto. It is necessary for me to stay with them and
reduce
their pressure and burden.

I will bring my laptop and
check
e-mail
everyday
to
make
sure that everything goes smooth. You can
also
reach me while I am away at +1 4560 3210. I will
get
back to you as
soon
as possible. In the meantime, my projects will
be taken
care by Rosie
Cheung
in my absence.

I am grateful if you could approve my
leave
application.

Your
sincerely
,

Annie
Leung
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IELTS letter You need to take leave from your work of over one month for personal reasons. Write a letter to your boss. In your letter: Explain the reason for the leave and the length of leave you need Explain how you will keep up-to-date while you are away Suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

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  American English
7 paragraphs
170 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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