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You enjoy the holiday organised by tour company write a letter to the manager and press the tour guide who I accampained you on the journey

You enjoy the holiday organised by tour company write a letter to the manager and press the tour guide who I accampained you on the journey E3dMQ

Dear SirI am Anchal and I am writing this letter to share my happiness towards the guide named Ajay who accompained us for our trip to Vrindavan. I booked a 3 days tour for my family and friends we were in a group of eight the majority of people were 40 + and wanted to experience the history of Lord Krishna. Firstly the travel bus was on schedule time, furthermore guide shared the itenary for those days with everyone. He showed us many places like temples monuments and also shared detailed history of each one of that. He was not only knowledgable but also interactive. He was humble with older and funny with as at the same time he was one of a kind in short we have enjoyed the trip even more with him I would I want like you to reward in by giving increment or bonus in his salary he could be the Asset for your company thank you for the memorable trip and the best tour guide

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