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Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter suggest someone you think should receive the award describe what the person does to help the community suggest an award that would be appropriate for this person

Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter suggest someone you think should receive the award describe what the person does to help the community suggest an award that would be appropriate for this person bYraX
Dear Sir or Madam, I would like to draw your attention to new perks that have incentivized our existing community to support our residential area in good conditions. I am talking about Alex Brown, who is an eco-friendly person and takes care of our area. This incredible person separates all our garbage into separate bins, which are related to the origin of it. After that he usually hires a special truck vehicle that can take all this separated trash and move it into a processing plant. In addition, he arranges every week procedures with local companies, where he collects all plastic stuff to make beneficial and useful utils with them to mitigate the level of plastic garbage. I would suggest that this person is so zealous and diligent to the current situation in our area. Because he spends the vast majority of his life, I would highlight and propose to him the trip to the recreational centre ‘Sunny’ in our city in 2 weeks for this work. I hope to obtain your response on this request as soon as possible. Yours faithfully, Kate Pastbina
Dear Sir or Madam,

I would like to draw your attention to new perks that have incentivized our existing community to support our residential area in
good
conditions. I am talking about Alex Brown, who is an eco-friendly person and takes care of our area.

This incredible person separates all our garbage into separate bins, which
are related
to the origin of it. After that he
usually
hires a special truck vehicle that can take all this separated trash and
move
it into a processing plant.
In addition
, he arranges every week procedures with local
companies
, where he collects all plastic stuff to
make
beneficial and useful
utils
with them to mitigate the level of plastic garbage.

I would suggest that this person is
so
zealous and diligent to the
current
situation in our area.
Because
he spends the vast majority of his life, I would highlight and propose to him the trip to the recreational
centre
‘Sunny’ in our city in 2 weeks for this work.

I hope to obtain your response on this request as
soon
as possible.

Yours
faithfully
,

Kate
Pastbina
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IELTS letter Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter suggest someone you think should receive the award describe what the person does to help the community suggest an award that would be appropriate for this person

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6.0
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