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You are a member of local gym .recently there has been a problem in the changing area you have reported this to the staff several times but no action was taken. Write a letter to the manager of the gym describe the problem in the changing area explain who you reported the problem to before suggest what should be done about the problem

You are a member of local gym. recently there has been a problem in the changing area you have reported this to the staff several times but no action was taken. Write a letter to the manager of the gym describe the problem in the changing area explain who you reported the problem to before suggest what should be done about the problem ljR6Q
Dear sir, I am writing a letter to express my dissatisfaction in your local gym. I am the membership of your gym over past 3years ago. Similarly, I am facing a changing room problem in your community club. Moreover, I fell really unhappy when I went there. Firstly, it's honor to all young leaders you have opened a fitness club for local individuals 10 years ago. Likewise, I am a permanent member of your club. Besides, couple of week ago when I completed my muscle training at that moment when I went to the changing room. Unfortunately, the room has changed. Also, john has also complained about these issue in front desk service. furthermore, no one is taking any action there we scholars are facing obstacle there in your club. I would like to request you that if you could manage and setup a new changing room there it would be good for all human beings. I look forward to your quick reply. Yours faithfully, Alash sanjel
Dear sir, I am writing a letter to express my dissatisfaction in your local gym. I am the membership of your gym over past 3years ago.
Similarly
, I am facing a changing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
room
problem in your community
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
club
.
Moreover
, I fell
really
unhappy when I went there.
Firstly
, it's honor to all young leaders you have opened a fitness
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
club
for local individuals 10 years ago.
Likewise
, I am a permanent member of your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
club
.
Besides
,
It seems that an article is missing.
couple of
week ago when I completed my muscle training at that moment when I went to the changing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
room
. Unfortunately, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
room
has
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changed
.
Also
, john has
also
complained about these issue in front desk service.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
furthermore
, no one is taking any action there we scholars are facing obstacle there in your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
club
. I would like to request you that if you could manage and
The verb 'set up' is spelled as two words. The noun 'setup' is spelled as one.
setup
a new changing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
room
there it would be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
for all human beings. I look forward to your quick reply. Yours
faithfully
,
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Alash
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
sanjel
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IELTS letter You are a member of local gym. recently there has been a problem in the changing area you have reported this to the staff several times but no action was taken. Write a letter to the manager of the gym describe the problem in the changing area explain who you reported the problem to before suggest what should be done about the problem

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