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On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. Describe the item you lost, explain how you lost it, tell the insurance company what you would like them to do.

On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. Describe the item you lost, explain how you lost it, tell the insurance company what you would like them to do. 6xLBj
Dear Sir, I am writting this letter to claim the amount of insurance for lost item. On 25 march, I was travelling through Airlines India from Goa to Delhi for holidays. Unfortunately, I lost my Apple laptop at airport which I purchased last week only. When I reached Delhi airport at 10 pm at. I took my luggage in trolly. Meanwhile, I just went to buy a coffee for me and within a couple to minutes my laptop bag was stolen. I search every where and inquire to visitors, on the contrary no one has idea about that. Luckey, I have not entered any data or detail in it. As I explained you what happen, consequently I want to claim money for my product. Moreover, I hope you understand my problem and timely action should be taken due to the fact it was extremely expansive. I look forward to hear from you in the near future. Yours sinceraly, Mika
Dear Sir, I am
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writting
this letter to claim the amount of insurance for lost item. On 25 march, I was travelling through Airlines India from Goa to Delhi for holidays. Unfortunately, I lost my Apple laptop at airport which I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchased
last week
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
.
“When” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When
I reached Delhi airport at 10 pm at. I took my luggage in
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trolly
. Meanwhile, I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
went to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
a coffee for me and within a couple to minutes my laptop bag
was stolen
. I search
Did you mean "everywhere"?
every where
and inquire to visitors,
on the contrary
no one has
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idea
about that.
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Luckey
, I have not entered any data or detail in it. As I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explained
The verb 'to explain something to someone' requires a preposition.
you
what happen,
consequently
I want to claim money for my product.
Moreover
, I hope you understand my problem and timely action should
be taken
due to the fact it was
extremely
expansive. I look forward
In the grammatical structure 'look + forward + to + verb', the verb 'to' is used with the gerund: "to hearing".
to hear
from you in the near future. Yours
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sinceraly
,
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
Mika

IELTS letter On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. Describe the item you lost, explain how you lost it, tell the insurance company what you would like them to do.

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  American English
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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