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A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: explain what you are currently doing describe your suitability for this area of work say when you can attend an interview

A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: explain what you are currently doing describe your suitability for this area of work say when you can attend an interview po89

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter with regard to the your restaurant's recent advertisement for waiters and waitresses in the local newspaper. This opportunity looks really exciting to me and I wanted to bring my application to your attention. I have been working as a waiter in Starbucks which is located in central market which is one of the busiest market located in the middle of the city. I am currently working in morning shift which gives me a wonderful experience of serving bulk customers as it is a peak time for working customers. I am also involved in training other waiters and waitresses in the areas of hospitality thus brining better customer experience to the restaurant. I have always loved my job as a waiter since I enjoy hospitality and I love the fact that this job brings smile on the faces of happy customers. I believe in the fact that a happy customer brings other happy faces which eventually brings profit to the restaurant. I have attached my resume with this letter for your reference. I can hop in for an interview as early as this coming Monday. Since your restaurant is located very near to my workplace, I can come for a morning as well as an evening interview. I look forward to your favourable response. Yours sincerely, Marty Gravin

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter with regard to A determiner cannot combine with a possessive pronoun. Did you mean simply "your restaurant" or "the restaurant"?your restaurantthe restaurant
the your restaurant
's recent advertisement for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withservantattendantstewardwaitress
waiters
 and waitresses in the local newspaper. This opportunity looks really
 exciting to me and I wanted to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withleadtransferdeliverbeartakecarry
bring
 my application to your attention.

I have been working as a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withservantattendantstewardwaitress
waiter
 in Starbucks which is located
 in central market which is one of the busiest market located in the middle of the city. I am currently
 working in morning shift which gives me a wonderful experience of serving bulk You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclientconsumerpatronpurchaser
customers
 as it is a peak time for working You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclientconsumerpatronpurchaser
customers
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am also
 involved in training other You use this word too often, consider replacing it withservantattendantstewardwaitress
waiters
 and waitresses in the areas of hospitality thus
 brining better You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclientconsumerpatronpurchaser
customer
 experience to the restaurant.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 have always This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admiredadored
loved
 my job as a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withservantattendantstewardwaitress
waiter
 since I enjoy hospitality and I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 the fact that this job You use this word too often, consider replacing it withleadtransferdeliverbeartakecarry
brings
 smile on the faces of happy You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclientconsumerpatronpurchaser
customers
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 believe in the fact that a happy You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclientconsumerpatronpurchaser
customer
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withleadtransferdeliverbeartakecarry
brings
 other happy faces which eventually
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withleadtransferdeliverbeartakecarry
brings
 profit to the restaurant.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 have attached my resume with this letter for your reference. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 can hop in for an interview as early as this coming Monday. Since your restaurant is located
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 near to my workplace, I can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 for a morning as well
 as an evening interview.

I look forward to your Possible spelling mistake. 'favourable' is British English.favorable
favourable
 response.

Yours sincerely
,

Marty Possible spelling mistake found.GrainGavinGravingGravenGravidGratin
Gravin