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You live in a high-rise building, which has a communal laundry room. Sometimes people don't come in time to empty the machines and other residents have to wait for a washer or dryer. You think the building management should purchase 10 extra laundry baskets and make them available for such times, so the machines can be freed up. Write to the Property Manager, Mr Watson. In your letter: explain how long you have been a resident describe the problem propose your solution

You live in a high-rise building, which has a communal laundry room. Sometimes people don't come in time to empty the machines and other residents have to wait for a washer or dryer. You think the building management should purchase 10 extra laundry baskets and make them available for such times, so the machines can be freed up. Write to the Property Manager, Mr Watson. In your letter: explain how long you have been a resident describe the problem propose your solution jl5M
Dear Mr Watson, Hope you are doing well. I have been statying in Flat 2015 of your Skylark Apartment from five years, and I must say that I have enjoyed staying here all these years without any major problems. However, rather lately, I, like many other residents of the complex are dealing with an issue which I think, deserves an immediate attention from your part. The issue, i am talking about, the the optimal use of commual laundry rooms where people sometimes have to wait for longer period of time to use washers and dryers in order to do their laundray because there is not just enough laundry baskets avaialble in the room. This problem becomes more acute when people do not bother to empty their baskets after their laundries are done. Based on these problems, I would appreciate if you can purchase 10 more laundry bags, so that the laundary users, waiting for their turns to do laundries, can empty their content in those baskets. This will improve the situation significantly and reduce our waiting time. Hope to hear from you soon regarding this. Yours sincerely, Harsh Bond
Dear Mr Watson,

Hope you are doing well. I have been
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statying
in Flat 2015 of your Skylark Apartment from five years, and I
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say that I have enjoyed staying here all these years without any major problems.
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rather
lately, I, like
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many
other residents of the complex are dealing with an issue which I
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think
, deserves an immediate attention from your part.

The issue,
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am talking about,
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the the
optimal
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of
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commual
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laundry
rooms where
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people
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sometimes
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have to
wait for longer period of time to
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use
washers and dryers in order to do their
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laundray
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because
there is not
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just
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enough
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laundry
baskets
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avaialble
in the room. This problem becomes more acute when
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people
do not bother to empty their baskets after their
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laundries
are done
.

Based on these problems, I would appreciate if you can
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purchase
10 more
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laundry
bags,
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so
that the
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laundary
users, waiting for their turns to do
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laundries
, can empty their content in those baskets. This will
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improve
the situation
significantly
and
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reduce
our waiting time.

Hope to hear from you
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soon
regarding this.

Yours
sincerely
,

Harsh Bond
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IELTS letter You live in a high-rise building, which has a communal laundry room. Sometimes people don't come in time to empty the machines and other residents have to wait for a washer or dryer. You think the building management should purchase 10 extra laundry baskets and make them available for such times, so the machines can be freed up. Write to the Property Manager, Mr Watson. In your letter: explain how long you have been a resident describe the problem propose your solution

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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