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You have wo a competition and won a prize. Write a letter to invite a friend

Dear James, How you doing? I haven’t seen you for ages. It’s a shame that we can’t find time to hang out together. I’m writing to inform you that I have recently participated in a photo competition provided by local photo center. My picture took the first place and will occur in an exhibition on Saturday in Dnepr’s Gallery. I want you to come there at 10 am and take a look at my shot. It’s very important to know your meaning about it. The photo was taken one month ago during my trip to Crimea. Remember I told you that I will climb the highest mountain in Crimea? I have done it! I did a selfie photo with top of the mountain surrounded by clouds behind me. The photo is very colorful and eye catching, that’s why it took the first place. One more thing, yesterday the Gallery’s manager called me and informed me about the exhibition and prize. I will be awarded by expensive camera, but I don’t know about model. Will see it on Saturday. By the way, it’s doesn’t matter. The participation is priority number one for me. Well, I would be very pleased to see you on the exhibition and look forward of hearing back from you. Best wishes, Max
Dear James,

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How you doing
? I haven’t
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seen
you for ages. It’s a shame that we can’t find time to hang out together. I’m writing to inform you that I have recently participated in a
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photo
competition provided by local
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photo
center. My picture took the
first
place and will occur in an exhibition on Saturday in
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Dnepr
’s Gallery. I want you to
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come
there at 10 am and take a look at my shot. It’s
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very
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important
to know your meaning about it.

The
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photo
was taken
one month ago during my trip to Crimea. Remember I
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told
you that I will climb the highest mountain in Crimea? I have done it! I did a selfie
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photo
with top of the mountain surrounded by clouds behind me. The
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photo
is
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very
colorful and eye catching, that’s why it took the
first
place.

One more thing, yesterday the Gallery’s manager called me and informed me about the exhibition and prize. I will
be awarded
by expensive camera,
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but
I don’t know about model. Will
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see
it on Saturday. By the way, it’s doesn’t matter. The participation is priority number one for me.

Well, I would be
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very
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pleased
to
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see
you on the exhibition and look forward of hearing back from you.

Best wishes,

Max
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IELTS letter You have wo a competition and won a prize. Write a letter to invite a friend

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
214 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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