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A large company needs an English-speaking ( project manager, Head Manager, supervisor, assistant, clerk, accountant) for a project. Choose one of the jobs and write a letter of application. Include

A large company needs an English-speaking ( project manager, Head Manager, supervisor, assistant, clerk, accountant) for a project. Choose one of the jobs and write a letter of application. Include 6xodK
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to apply for a job of Head Manager at your hotel which was advertised in "Time" newspaper. I am thirty five years old and I obtained a degree in management and services at the hotels at the Tourism and Services University in 2005. I am presently working as a receptionist at the "Sheraton Hotel", where I have been for the last six years. In addition to this, I participated in "Language Center" course and learned Arabian language. I feel I have many of the important qualifications needed for this job. I have worked with foreigners. I am proactive and able to handle multiple tasks simultaneously. I am currently looking for a position that will allow me to develop my skills and experience. If you want me to attend an interview, I would be able to come at any time convenient to you as I do want to be a member of your company. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Adam Smith
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to apply for a job of Head Manager at your hotel which
was advertised
in
"
Time
"
newspaper. I am
thirty five
years
old
and I obtained a degree in management and services at the hotels at the Tourism and Services University in 2005. I am
presently
working as a receptionist at the
"
Sheraton Hotel
"
, where I have been for the last six years.
In addition
to this, I participated in
"
Language Center
"
course and learned Arabian language. I feel I have
many
of the
important
qualifications needed for this job. I have worked with foreigners.
I
am proactive and able to handle multiple tasks
simultaneously
.
I
am
currently
looking for a position that will
allow
me to develop my
skills
and experience. If you want me to attend an interview, I would be able to
come
at any time convenient to you as I do want to be a member of your
company
. I am looking forward to hearing from you
soon
. Yours
faithfully
, Adam
Smith
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IELTS letter A large company needs an English-speaking ( project manager, Head Manager, supervisor, assistant, clerk, accountant) for a project. Choose one of the jobs and write a letter of application. Include

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
172 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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