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You recently took a flight with an airline and they lost your luggage. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, explain a problem that this loss caused you at your destination describe a particular item of clothing that was lost outline what you would like the airline to do

You recently took a flight with an airline and they lost your luggage. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, explain a problem that this loss caused you at your destination describe a particular item of clothing that was lost outline what you would like the airline to do MMWMa
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to complain about my bags misplaced by your staff, while I was travelling from Dubai to India in Flight A760 on, 2nd April 2021 in your reputed airlines. I was very excited when the flight landed at the airport in India, my destination country, but the next two hours were no less than a horrible experience for me. They kept me waiting for an answer, which intensified my anxiety. Point1 I was carrying a black party gown, which costed a fortune, that was inside my lost baggage. That dress was very precious for me, as it was given to me by a very special person. Point2 I stood at the luggage alley for more than an hour enquiring about my suitcases, but your staff did not care much about my loss. My immediate appeal to you is to find out where are my carry cases and, return them to me safely at my residence. I would like to receive a written reply right away, informing me about the dispatch status of my luggage. Point3 I will be looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Kokila
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to complain about my bags misplaced by your staff, while I was travelling from Dubai to India in Flight A760 on, 2nd April 2021 in your reputed airlines.

I was
very
excited when the flight landed at the airport in India, my destination country,
but
the
next
two hours were no less than a horrible experience for me. They
kept
me waiting for an answer, which intensified my anxiety. Point1

I was carrying a black party gown, which costed a fortune, that was inside my lost baggage. That dress was
very
precious for me, as it was
given
to me by a
very
special person. Point2

I stood at the luggage alley for more than an hour
enquiring
about my suitcases,
but
your staff did not care much about my loss. My immediate appeal to you is to find out where are my carry cases and, return them to me
safely
at my residence. I would like to receive a written reply right away, informing me about the dispatch status of my luggage. Point3

I will be looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,
Kokila
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IELTS letter You recently took a flight with an airline and they lost your luggage. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, explain a problem that this loss caused you at your destination describe a particular item of clothing that was lost outline what you would like the airline to do

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  American English
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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